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 "The city is a wonder to these people.  Perhaps it does not compare "The city is a wonder to these people.  Perhaps it does not compare
-to your great cities, but it has the finest the [[Dyanai]] can offer, and+to your great cities, but it has the finest the [[Dyanaî]] can offer, and
 its rulers share a luxury that some kings only dream about." its rulers share a luxury that some kings only dream about."
  
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 if you move even an inch, the feeling will fade. if you move even an inch, the feeling will fade.
  
-[[Roderick]] is standing next to you.  "Come on, Roget.  The villagers +[[Roderick]] is standing next to you.  "Come on, [[Roget]].  The villagers 
-all want to hear the great tale.  Dhersion has already started."+all want to hear the great tale.  [[Dhersion]] has already started."
  
 Reality fades back in.  The fog in your mind begins to dissipate. Reality fades back in.  The fog in your mind begins to dissipate.
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-Later, inside the long house, Dhersion tells the //Grand Tale// to an enraptured +Later, inside the long house, [[Dhersion]] tells the //Grand Tale// to an enraptured 
 audience.  After his story (which, you note, differs significantly from reality)  audience.  After his story (which, you note, differs significantly from reality) 
 concludes, you catch his eye and call him over. concludes, you catch his eye and call him over.
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 "Hrm.  I'm not good at this.  Orders, I understand.  But this...this is a  "Hrm.  I'm not good at this.  Orders, I understand.  But this...this is a 
-request.  They need the Staff, Dhersion.  It's the center of their culture, +request.  They need the Staff, [[Dhersion]].  It's the center of their culture, 
 their way of life, and it is, quite literally, central to their survival.  I  their way of life, and it is, quite literally, central to their survival.  I 
 know it's immensely powerful, and I know how much you've learned with it.  But  know it's immensely powerful, and I know how much you've learned with it.  But 
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 "The staff is in your charge now, my friend, and I hope you find it a lighter  "The staff is in your charge now, my friend, and I hope you find it a lighter 
-burden in your custody than it proved in mine. Take it to the Dyanai, crown +burden in your custody than it proved in mine. Take it to the [[Dyanaî]], crown 
 their King, and make amends with your wife! For my part, my chapter in the tale  their King, and make amends with your wife! For my part, my chapter in the tale 
 of the Rain King is now closed, and I do not regret my part in it, from the  of the Rain King is now closed, and I do not regret my part in it, from the 
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