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 ==== Galin, the Boy King ====
-Galin was the son of the much-loved Paladin Queen [[carina|Carina II]], who was killed
+Galin was the son of the much-loved [[carina|Paladin Queen Carina II]], who was
-by the [[Dark Mage]] in 1097, when Galin was only nine years old.
+killed by the [[Dark Mage]] in 1097, when Galin was only nine years old.  Even
+though he is now an adult, he is sometimes still referred to as "the boy king".
-Galin assumed the crown under the supervision of his father, [[Vyner]].  However, in
+Galin assumed the crown under the supervision of his father, [[Vyner]]. However,
-, [[Vyner]] was assassinated and the fourteen-year-old Galin appointed an unknown to
+in 1103, [[Vyner]] was assassinated and the fourteen-year-old Galin appointed an
-be his new advisor. Many poor reforms followed and the great kingdom began to decline.
+unknown //(dig up name!)// to be his new advisor. Many poor reforms followed and
+the great kingdom began to decline.
-Even though the new advisor is revealed to have used magical influences on the boy, and
+Even though the new advisor is revealed to have used magical influences on the
-his influence lasted less than four months, the damage done to the kingdom was significant,
+boy, and his influence lasted less than four months, the damage done to the
-and Galin's court was weakened considerably.
+kingdom was significant, and Galin's court was weakened considerably.
-The magic change in 1108 exacerbated Galin's weakness and now rival baronies repeatedly
+The magic change in 1108 exacerbated Galin's weakness and now rival baronies
-challenge each other -- often resorting to military campaigns to settle their differences.
+repeatedly challenge each other -- often resorting to military campaigns to
+settle their differences.
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